Sunday, October 30, 2011

Prompt 192: Sunset


Your tears are for the
both of us
I know your pain well
it is mine
But it’s okay to break
let it go
My calm will help you
lift your burden
I'll help you in carrying
what you can't
My strength will serve when
yours is gone
I'll always be close by
keeping an eye
And when you're unable to
walk any longer
I'll carry you in my arms
across the sea ...
into the sunset ...

Kremo of The Obtuse Angle

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  1. such a tender and lovely poem
    yes if we can be strong for another when they are not
    and then someone is strong for us we are not
    the world would go round in a wonderful way.

  2. So touching, so loving. Beautiful expression of love here.

    Thanks for a prompt that connects with nature, both outside and within.

  3. a beautiful poem, Kremo! thank you for the prompt.
    {formerly haiku love songs}