Sunday, June 28, 2009

Prompt 70: Blue Rain


Thanks to Lissa at Just Writing Words for the prompt blue rain this week. Thanks, Lissa, for the photo, too!

yesterday my mind refused to expand any thoughts
it has left me alone
to dwell inside this crumpled body
aching without reprieve
all day I hid underneath a black cloud
shifting my heels
I fell into a puddle of blue rain
and slipped into darkness
when I opened my eyes
everything has changed into one hue
when the blue sun came out
a strange amusement took over me



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11 comments:

  1. Geraldine June 28, 2009 at 12:02 AM

    Wonderful prompt! Thanks Lissa. Love your interpretation too.

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  2. JimJune 28, 2009 at 12:45 AM

    Thank you Lissa, this was a nice and very challenging prompt. I had fun with it.
    I like your use of blue, I had thought of a moody poem too. Yours was much better than mine would have been, it kept me trying to decide if you would get into a better mood or not.
    Thank you,
    ..

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  3. Rinkly RimesJune 28, 2009 at 3:05 AM

    Thank you for an unusual meme.


    http://rinklyrimes.blogspot.com/2009/06/one-single-impression-blue-rain.html

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  4. Gemma WisemanJune 28, 2009 at 3:32 AM

    Interesting process of feelings in your poem and love your photo!

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  5. lissaJune 28, 2009 at 11:14 AM

    thought I wouldn't write a piece for the prompt that I provide but somehow I ended up with one

    I'm glad everyone like the prompt

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  6. ifJune 28, 2009 at 2:42 PM

    wonderful pic...!

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  7. Bruce MillerJune 28, 2009 at 9:10 PM

    Nice prompt reminded me of rain falling from blue skies -- sunshowers.

    In the country we say "The Devil is getting married".

    Here is my haiku.

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  8. The Dark LordJune 29, 2009 at 9:59 AM

    Yet another great prompt! Thank you Lissa...

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  9. Unseen India ToursJuly 2, 2009 at 2:08 PM

    Lovely photograph and wonderful quote !! Thanks for sharing..Do check my another blog also i.e.Unseen Rajasthan

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  10. AnonymousJuly 5, 2009 at 9:28 AM

    The lyrics of a song by Jorma Kaukonen for this topic: Too many years

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  11. MarilynJuly 9, 2009 at 11:29 PM

    Playing along, but I'm cheating because I'll be out of town and won't be able to visit back for a while.

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