tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7501829645946942403.post7408558662156792513..comments2024-02-08T07:30:44.083-05:00Comments on One Single Impression: Prompt 28: Defenses DownAndreehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08159511912645034019noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7501829645946942403.post-80488400730461375562009-01-06T15:13:00.000-05:002009-01-06T15:13:00.000-05:00Read your article, if I just would say: very good,...Read your article, if I just would say: very good, it is somewhat insufficient, but I am <BR/><BR/>still tempted to say: really good!<BR>Personalized Signature:面对面视频游戏,本地棋牌游戏,本地方言玩游戏,打麻将,玩掼蛋,斗地主,炸金花,玩梭哈Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7501829645946942403.post-89794731904788366422008-09-12T14:02:00.000-04:002008-09-12T14:02:00.000-04:00Wow, is your poem deep. It knocked my socks off. ...Wow, is your poem deep. It knocked my socks off. I couldn't even read the whole thing. I will have to come back to it later...<BR/><BR/>In other news, your blog is such a cool idea!!!Qarohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09896754613872523044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7501829645946942403.post-32426866370153291652008-09-10T19:19:00.000-04:002008-09-10T19:19:00.000-04:00Put it in two I just wanted to see it out of my he...Put it in two I just wanted to see it out of my head and in print...<BR/>Well I'm off to read.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7501829645946942403.post-32341040917824060462008-09-10T11:55:00.000-04:002008-09-10T11:55:00.000-04:00It was a great prompt and I might get to it later ...It was a great prompt and I might get to it later but the night before I looked out my front door and saw a half moon. It's image has been lurking in my mind since then. Sorry I just could not help myself.<BR/><BR/>love-bdCassiopeia Riseshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02625091389788114012noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7501829645946942403.post-61879366871109756912008-09-09T18:17:00.000-04:002008-09-09T18:17:00.000-04:00time is passing so quickly these days... glad i co...time is passing so quickly these days... glad i could participate again...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7501829645946942403.post-66175422037099579692008-09-09T05:27:00.000-04:002008-09-09T05:27:00.000-04:00a great prompt. makes you stop and think.a great prompt. makes you stop and think.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7501829645946942403.post-12967218249310466242008-09-09T01:02:00.000-04:002008-09-09T01:02:00.000-04:00Just discovered this site. A heart wrenching topic...Just discovered this site. A heart wrenching topic, perhaps, or a subtle opportunity for change.TDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10411110456297096938noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7501829645946942403.post-8702634918910235742008-09-08T09:29:00.000-04:002008-09-08T09:29:00.000-04:00Sometimes . . . our defenses are down . . . whethe...Sometimes . . . our defenses are down . . . whether we mean for them to be . . . or not!<BR/><BR/><A HREF="http://nickersandinkblog.blogspot.com/2008/09/big-hitter-limericked-fun-on-real-home.html" REL="nofollow">THE BIG HITTER, at NICKERS AND INK</A> <BR/><BR/>Blessings all,<BR/>LindaLA Nickershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14891624164014505323noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7501829645946942403.post-15946281479062233872008-09-07T16:35:00.000-04:002008-09-07T16:35:00.000-04:00This is my first time posting here. I was a part o...This is my first time posting here. I was a part of One Deep Breath until I needed to take a blogging break... and I am glad to have found this site in its place.<BR/>Nicole- this is a very powerful and brave poem indeed- thanks for sharing it and for the prompt- although I took a much lighter view of things!Reginahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14287107184977896696noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7501829645946942403.post-20627973312912685472008-09-07T15:04:00.000-04:002008-09-07T15:04:00.000-04:00Looks like this prompt is going to stir up all kin...Looks like this prompt is going to stir up all kinds of things! A Powerful and sad poem. My favorite lines? "...that grabbed onto concepts, oughts, and shoulds with iron teeth and pounded them into my flesh..." That practice would leave a bitter taste in anyone's mouth!Kathie Brownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10377224759599266209noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7501829645946942403.post-32004408126829241512008-09-07T11:33:00.000-04:002008-09-07T11:33:00.000-04:00Mmmm, powerful poem indeed. Really brings out the ...Mmmm, powerful poem indeed. Really brings out the importance of letting our defences down on our own terms!<BR/><BR/>Here's mine: <A HREF="http://wordsthatsing.wordpress.com/2008/09/07/song_of_fragility/" REL="nofollow">song of fragility</A>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7501829645946942403.post-15450073128556362682008-09-07T11:03:00.000-04:002008-09-07T11:03:00.000-04:00I really like this Nicole. It's interesting that ...I really like this Nicole. It's interesting that we used the same metaphore of walls, though in different ways.sgreerpitthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07764262558160301061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7501829645946942403.post-87377789287666086312008-09-07T08:35:00.000-04:002008-09-07T08:35:00.000-04:00One of my favorite songs by Eminem" with a poem of...<A HREF="http://hummingbunny.wordpress.com/2008/09/07/one-of-my-favorite-songs-by-eminem/" REL="nofollow"> One of my favorite songs by Eminem"</A> with a poem of course.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7501829645946942403.post-45647611900486329342008-09-07T02:40:00.000-04:002008-09-07T02:40:00.000-04:00What a dramatic poem! There is such a powerful for...What a dramatic poem! There is such a powerful force of ominous tragedy in it! And love the artwork you have chosen to complement it!Gemma Wisemanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17466540188839321484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7501829645946942403.post-60616926987186136702008-09-07T01:28:00.000-04:002008-09-07T01:28:00.000-04:00A very strong response to the prompt, Nicole. The ...A very strong response to the prompt, Nicole. The story grows freely through your words. The structure ebbs and flows in line with the emotion in the text. You have an ending that forces the full impact of your story upon the reader: emotional fear.<BR/><BR/>I like this ...Juliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03334765584939911058noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7501829645946942403.post-55005809127499787802008-09-07T01:15:00.000-04:002008-09-07T01:15:00.000-04:00Good prompt that can be taken in many ways. Thanks...Good prompt that can be taken in many ways. Thanks.spacedlawhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12462723005560128474noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7501829645946942403.post-41242584403742685422008-09-07T00:45:00.000-04:002008-09-07T00:45:00.000-04:00Very nice, Nicole, you said it like it was! (Only...Very nice, Nicole, you said it like it was! (Only I hope not in reality, that was a sad affair!)<BR/>Mine is in a similar vein, but very simple, yet veiled.<BR/>..Jimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02982249173214655060noreply@blogger.com